What are the sample essays retelling the folktale "Cây khế" in a character's words for 6th-grade students in Vietnam?
What are the sample essays retelling the folktale "Cây khế" in a character's words for 6th-grade students in Vietnam?
I am the older brother in the story about the starfruit tree. If I could go back in time, I wish I had not been so greedy to face such a bitter outcome.
From a young age, our parents passed away early, leaving my younger brother and me with a large inheritance. However, I was selfish, seizing all the houses and fields, leaving my younger brother with only a small garden and a solitary starfruit tree. My brother never complained but tended to the starfruit tree every day, living a simple life.
One day, a strange bird flew down and ate the starfruit. My brother sadly said:
- Bird, this starfruit tree is all I have; if you eat it all, how will I survive?
Unexpectedly, the bird replied:
- Eat one fruit, return a lump of gold. Bring a bag three handspans wide tomorrow to carry!
My brother listened, prepared a bag three handspans in width, and miraculously, the bird carried him to an island full of gold and silver. He took just enough and returned to build a house and help the poor.
When I found out about it, my greed was awakened. I begged my brother to exchange the house for the starfruit tree. Then, like my brother, I met the strange bird too. But I was greedy, bringing a huge bag. As the bird flew over the sea, the bag was too heavy, and I fell into the sea, losing everything.
I paid a heavy price for my greed. If I could do it again, I would not be selfish or greedy but live harmoniously like my brother. But it is too late now...
Sample 2: Role-playing as the younger brother to retell the folktale "Cây khế"
I am the younger brother in the story "The Starfruit Tree". Even now, I still clearly remember the miraculous things I experienced.
Our parents passed away early, and I was left with my only sibling. But my brother was greedy, taking all the property, leaving me with just a small hut and a starfruit tree. I did not complain but took care of the starfruit tree every day, treating it as my only friend.
One day, a very large strange bird flew in, eating the ripe starfruit. I sadly said:
- Bird, this starfruit tree is all I have; if you eat it all, how will I survive?
The bird suddenly spoke:
- Eat one fruit, return a lump of gold. Bring a bag three handspans wide tomorrow to carry!
I was surprised but did as told. The next day, the bird carried me across the great sea to an island full of gold and silver. I took only a small enough amount and returned. Thanks to that gold, I rebuilt the house and helped the poor. I lived peacefully, never boasting or being greedy.
When my brother learned of this, he demanded to exchange all his assets for the starfruit tree. I cared for my brother and agreed. But he was too greedy, bringing a huge bag. As the bird flew over the sea, the bag was too heavy, and he fell into the water, losing his life.
I was heartbroken. If only my brother weren't greedy, perhaps we could have lived happily together. This story taught me that greed can make a person lose everything.
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What is the assessment form for 6th-grade Literature in Vietnam?
Under Article 5 of Circular 22/2021/TT-BGDDT:
Form of assessment
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3. Assessment methods for subjects
a) Conduct assessment for: Physical education (PE), Art, Music, Fine Arts, local education subjects, experience learning activities, and career counseling; learning results of subjects shall be categorized as “Đạt” (Qualified) or “Chưa đạt” (Unqualified).
b) Conduct assessment based on both feedback and scores for subjects in formal education program, except for those under Point a of this Clause; subject-based learning results shall be given in a total of 10 scores, any other form of scores must be converted to 10-score model. Assessment score must be an integer or a decimal number rounded to the nearest tenths.
Thus, besides subjects like Physical education (PE), Art, Music, Fine Arts, local education subjects, experience learning activities, and career counseling assessed via feedback, other subjects are assessed based on both feedback and scores.
Hence, 6th-grade Literature will be assessed based on both feedback and scores.
What are the regulations on assessing the learning results in each semester and school year of 6th-grade students in Vietnam?
Under Clause 2, Article 9 of Circular 22/2021/TT-BGDDT, for subjects assessed via both feedback and scores, DTBmhk is used to assess the learning results of a student in each semester, while DTBmcn is used to assess the learning results of a student in the entire school year. The learning results of a student in each semester and in the entire school year shall be assessed by one of 4 categories: Excellent, Good, Qualified, Unqualified.
1) Excellent:
- All subjects assessed with feedback are placed in the Qualified category.
- All subjects assessed by both feedback and scores have minimum scores of 6.5 for DTBmhk and DTBmcn with 6 subjects among which have minimum scores of 8.0 for DTBmhk and DTBmcn.
2) Good:
- All subjects assessed with feedback are placed in the Qualified category.
- All subjects assessed by both feedback and scores have minimum scores of 5.0 for DTBmhk and DTBmcn, with 6 subjects having minimum scores of 6.5 for DTBmhk and DTBmcn.
3) Qualified:
- Have no more than 1 subject assessed via feedback placed in the Unqualified category.
- At least 6 subjects assessed by both feedback and scores have minimum scores of 5.0 for DTBmhk and DTBmcn with 0 subjects have scores lower than 3.4 for DTBmhk and DTBmcn.
4) Unqualified: Remaining cases.